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#1 OFFLINE   Phantom

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Posted 08 July 2009 - 12:50 AM

tonight I've been feeling very emotional, although I was at work, and I didn't get to watch the memorial

so when I came back from work, I didn't really feel like sleeping, although it was really very late

my soul was still flooded by emotions, which I needed to express, before I can end my day, and go to sleep

so I wrote few words, which could be called a poem, if I had talent

I would say that it's mostly words which matched themselves alone with each other, and just danced in my mind, in an attempt to express something not so easy to express with words


Who am I
And where am I going
With 1000 thoughts and memories in my mind
You are too far for me to see you
And to approach you

The screens are getting darker
The crowd weeps
Your music floods our souls
Where are you going
Angel of music
Mysterious like a riddle
Why are you leaving us

Your beautiful soul
Brought light to our hearts
Brightened up our faces
Took away our loneliness
Dried our tears
And now you are traveling
On your way among the angels of heaven

How can I accept
That it’s time to drop the curtain
I can never say goodbye
Please, don’t tell me This Is It
And that it’s over now the music of the night


of course it is dedicated to him

but also to all of us, who feel like having lost someone very dear

#2 OFFLINE   magic

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Posted 08 July 2009 - 12:56 AM

Zoi, that's a very lovely peom that I feel is coming from the heart :luv

#3 OFFLINE   HanabiChick

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Posted 08 July 2009 - 09:12 AM

That's so beautiful :cryin

#4 OFFLINE   Phantom

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Posted 08 July 2009 - 01:32 PM

yes, it is coming from my heart

I was almost crying, when I was writing it





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